Wednesday, 17 June 2020

Sick Sentences

This is my sick sentences. I enjoyed writing about the snail. I think that my sick sentences are a supernova because I cannot add any more than what I have done on this slide. I really enjoy the new idea that the teachers came up with us all writing a story about the snail. This is how my story went... 

Delicious. That was simply delicious. She very rarely came across a strawberry, but whenever she did she always made the most of it. Chewing through the sweet, juicy flesh, she savored every mouthful. Now, though, she was full, and slowly eased herself (shell and all) out of the hole she had made in the side of the strawberry. It was time to explore another part of the garden…She slowly climbed up a tree. What could it be? It was a….  Mandarin tree. She found a juicy and sweet mandarin. She started to enjoy every juicy mouthful. She had a very orange day.


2 comments:

  1. I love your Sentences Hannah! I like your Story the best though! So Creative!

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  2. Fantastic detail in your sentences and I love the little story. Well done.

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